Friday, May 27, 2011

Hacker...

This...is the fresh, first, new copy of the rough draft of the Hacker story.

Well, really its the summary.

Enjoy...!

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Jodi Harte, while walking down the street sees a 17 year old girl sprinting down the sidewalk. Two other men are chasing after her, screaming "STOP!". 
  So, naturally, when the men run by, Jodi trips them. She then walks away whistling. 
  When Jodi makes it back to her car, someone is already inside. The same girl from before, the one that was running down the street. The girl is sitting in the drivers seat, playing with a cellphone.  
  Jodi demands to know who she is and how ahe got in the car, and the girl answered by saying-
  "I'm a hacker. As you can see, I also hotwire cars." 
   This girl is Siren Caspian, and she has been recently hired by a unknown source to hack the English Sanctuary's computers. 
   But, She just needs one more person to help her. Someone who likes to play tricks, who can easilly get past the cleavers, and who knows how to create a distraction. 
  Ah, I see you are all pointing at Jodi. 
  Okay, you want to do it?
   ...excellent. 
   

4 comments:

  1. I can't wait for the first part ( if this is the prologue).

    Please follow this:

    For all those who do not know it yet, Kallista is in trouble. She has been told to stop visiting the blogs by her parents, and we need to help her. One of the reasons for this is that they thought she's a bad influence on us.

    GO to your blogs and post a plea to Kallista's parents to let her come on as she did before. Tell them what you think of her and tell them how great she is. Get all the blogs in Blogland posting some such as I have said. I hope they will see it. I don't know that they will, but all we can do is hope and post our thoughts of our dear friend Kallista Pendragon!

    I am doing a round trip and posting this comment on as many blogs as I can reach. But I need you to help. Write up a post, then copy and paste this comment to any blog that I have missed.

    I am sure that at least one time in the past we have been encouraged, complimented or helped out by Kallista. Now it's our turn to give back that favor.

    Once you have completed your post, head down to the Bio-Rama and post a link to it in the comments section of the latest post.


    Original comment by Skyril, edited quickly by Hellboy. Now let's freaking help Kallista.

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  2. Whoa... sweet job. Especially since I was listening to creepy Invader Zim music just made this even more epic. Great fanfic/skulduggery-referencing story. Can you check out my story? I need feedback.

    http://thatlakinsonguy.blogspot.com/2011/05/story-i-wrote.html

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  3. Hellboy (AKA Israel Elysium)-I'm on it. :3

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